Do any of the paragraphs need to be rewritten because they are confusing and need to be better written to be descriptive?
These should be the most interesting items that you have noted in your columns and will the details that you flesh out into the paragraphs of the body of your essay.
Topics are set out in each separate paragraph and a topic sentence begins that paragraph and need to relate to your introductory paragraph and your thesis.
Your essay needs to be structured in a manner that helps your topic to make sense.
If you are describing an event, you will need to write your paragraphs in chronological order.
You should ask yourself if you were the reader, would the essay make sense to you?
Is it easy to read so that anyone can understand what the topic of the essay is?
This conclusion also needs to reaffirm your thesis (if necessary).
Your conclusion needs to be well written because it is the final thing to be read by your reader and will remain on their mind the longest after they have read the remainder of your essay.
Read the essay again to a friend or family member and have them give you any criticisms that they might have.
Have someone else ready your essay and then ask them if anything needs to be clarified or if they received a clear picture from the details given in the essay.