Some applicants write several very different draft versions before deciding which approach works best for them.
Show drafts of your personal statement to as many people as you can.
In providing the context for your academic achievements and choices, describe your passions and commitments, your goals, a personal challenge faced, a hardship overcome or the cultural awareness you’ve gained. Your personal statement should reflect the experience and maturity of someone who has already attended college.
It should reflect your understanding of the components of an undergraduate education, such as general education and the major.
Quality of writing and depth of content contribute toward a meaningful and relevant personal statement.
You should address the following topics in your personal statement.
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For example: serious illness; disability; first generation in your family to attend college; significant financial hardship or responsibilities associated with balancing work, family and school.
Share those aspects of your life that are not apparent from your transcripts. Personal statements too often include sentences such as “I’ve always wanted to be a Husky” or “My whole family attended the UW.” Although this may be important to you personally, such reasons are not particularly valuable to the Admissions staff because they do not tell us anything distinctive about your experiences and ultimate goals.