Over the period, it can be observed that there was a significant surge in the percentage of the population that owned a computer.
In the year 2002, only about 58% of the population owned a computer, whereas by 2010, this gradually increased to where over three-quarters of individuals had a home computer.correspond to higher levels of computer ownership in both of those years.
Your diagrams don't convey meaningful information; you seem to want to use them as decorations.
The second one supplements what will presumably be text explaining you work smart (so the diagram doesn't add anything); the first one is actually a bit of a mystery to me and I can't tell what point you're trying to make, but even if I could, you'd probably be better off making that point in words like other cover letters do.
As 25% of your marks are for the range of vocabulary that you use, this is a very important component to review as you prepare for the Writing Task 1.
Here, I am going to provide you with a range of words and phrases to incorporate into your writing now, so that you can get top marks on at least the lexical resource category.
In his book , Dan Roam argues that to pictures is a power tool to solving problems and selling ideas.
I have seen pictures used in solving problem works (e.g.
It has the be presented in such a way that anyone looking at it will understand why it was included and subsequently agree with your decision.
This is a difficult litmus test, but an important one because once you send out your written material you have no control over who looks at it and what mood or state they're in.